2023年初中英语作文万能黄金模板

第一部分

记叙文体裁解读及人物描写点拨

体裁解读

记叙文是以记人叙事为主要内容的文章，通常包括六个要索:时间、地点、人物、事件、原因及结果，写作时各要素要交代清楚，但并不要求全部具备。写记叙类文章时除了六个要素外，还要注意以下几点:

1记叙方式。 通常有顺叙、倒叙和插叙三种。顺叙是英语记叙文最常用的一 种记叙方式，即按照事件发展的时间先后顺序来叙述。

2.人称。一般用第一人称和第三人称进行写作。第一人称是从“参与者”亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历开始叙述;第三人称是以“观察者”的身份进行记叙，通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事呈现在读者面前。

3.时态。记叙文用于记叙过去发生的事件或经历，因此常用一般过去时， 还可根据上下文辅以其他时态。

人物描写点拨

人物描写类的作文， 大多围绕亲情、友情、师生情、榜样力量、人物奋斗等话题展开，或叙事抒怀，或表明个人对人物所持的情感。此类文章以记叙文居多，也可夹叙夹议。来出在中学生英语课程标准中，初中阶段的内容与要求中所提到的话题，比如famous people(名人)、interests and hobbies (兴趣和爱好)等，会涉及到人物描写。

人物描写的文章，对人物各方面的描写是必不可少的:外貌描写、语言描写、神态描写、动作描写、心理描写等等，根据文章的需要，确定写哪些，哪些详写，哪些略写。写人离不开写事，因为人物的特点总是在具体的事例中表现出来的。文章时态要根据事情发生的频率而定:经常性的行为多用一般现在时， 一次性的行为多用一般过去时，当然，其他时态也可能会涉及。

在写人的时候，我们可以通过以下三部分来写作:

1.简单介绍人物的概况。般包括姓名 、性别、年龄、职业、家庭背景等。写作时使用的语青必须符合英语表达习惯如姓名的书写、年龄的表达、人称或称呼的法取等。

2从多方面对人物进行刻面。为了使人物的形象丰满起来，给读者留下深刻印象，我们可以对人物的外貌、神态、动作等进行描写，并选取简短的事例来说明其品质和个性。在具体写作时，要正确把握现在时、过去时和将来时的用法。

3.对人物进行评价。在文章结尾处要介绍你对人物的评价或谈论你的个人感受，无论是喜欢还是讨厌，是称赞还是批评，都要明确地表达出来。

第二部分

写人记叙文万能模板

①Do you know (引出人物)?She/He ls (人物身份)

②She/He is tall and (身材)Her/His hair is

(头友)She/He always wears (表情)and gives us the impression that

(每人的印象)

is always willing to (性格)She/He is good at (特长)

She/He always helps me out whenever I.Once (引出事列)To my surprise,

(她/他的做法)

③She/He is and I hope (表达愿望).

模板内容要点

①引出人物

②详细介绍人物

③做出评价，表达感想

第三部分

必备词汇与套用句型

必备亮点词汇

beautiful漂亮的

pretty漂亮的

handsome帅气的

strong强壮的

round face圆脸

broad face宽脸

straight hair直发

curly hair卷发

short/long hair短/长发

long nose高鼻梁

ordinary-looking长相普通的

wear glasses戴眼镜

graduate from..毕业于....

get a... degree得到...学位

get further education深造

study abroad出国留学

humorous幽默的

clever/smart聪明的

patient耐心的

hard-working努力的

friendly友好的

warm-hearted热心的

be fond of...喜.....

enjoy doing sth.喜欢做菜事

be crazy about.. .对....着谜

have a git for. ....天赋

be interested in... .对....感兴趣

be in the lead处于领先地位

knowledgeable知识渊博的

famous著名的

well-known知名的

think highly o... .对....评价很高

be remembered as...被后人誉.为....

be regarded as..被当......

be respected by..受....尊微

devote one s lifetime to.倾注毕生精力

live in...居住在....

be born in..出生......

spent one s childhood in... ...过童年

live a happy busy life过着幸福/忙碌的生活

经典套用句型

闪亮篇首句

(1) Wang Nan, a world champion in ping-pong, is.. tall with the weight of..王楠，乒乓球世界冠军，.高.... 体重....

(2) My mother is a rural woman, who..我的母亲是一个农村妇女，她...

(3) is young beautiful lady. ..是位年轻漂亮的女士。

(4) If you ask me who ....1 will tell you it is. ..at once.如果你问谁是.....我会马上告诉......

(5) ...was from a worker / teacher s family ..生于一个工人/教师家庭。

(6) He/She was born on..(time) in ...(place) 他/地出生在......(时间)......(地点)。

出彩篇中句

(1) Her eyes are very big/bright.她的眼睛很大/很明亮。

(2) He often wears casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts.他经常穿着像牛仔和T恤之类的便装。

( 3) He had very little school education, but he knows that...他没怎么上过学，但是他知道

( 4) His/Her family was so poor/ rich that..他/她的家庭是如此的贫穷/富裕以至于....

(5) He worked hard every day to make money to keep our family.

他每天都努力工作赚钱来供养我们的家庭。

(6) When at... he..当..... ....

(7) I was about to...when...我正要....突然......

(8)He/She worked hard so as to improve.... 他/她为了提高.... 工作1学习很努力。

(9) His/Her father was so strict with him/her that..

他/她的父亲对他/她是如此的严厉以至.....

精彩篇尾句

( 1 ) He deserves/is worthy of our respect.他值得我们尊重。

(2 ) Without her help, I will never... 如果没有她的帮助，我永远都无法.....

(3) I will respect and love.... forever. 我将会永远尊敬和爱戴.....

( 4 ) She is honest and always ready to help others.她为人诚实，并且乐于助人。

(5) She has set an example for...她给....树立了榜样。

( 6 ) Now I understand my father s love for me. I will never forget my father.现在我明白了父亲对我的爱。我永远不会忘记我的父亲。

第四部分

模板范文演练

(河南)你身边的每个人对你来说都具有特殊的意义。请以“My special”为题用英语写一篇短文，描述你家庭的某个成员或你的朋友、老师、同学等。

要求：1.在题目空格处填入你要描述的对象，如 grandma,teacher或 friend等;

2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;

3.80词左右。

万能模板套用分析

首先，点明要叙述的人物

其次，对要叙述的人物进行详细的介绍。

最后，发表感受

满分范文

My special friend

Do you know Mr.Smith? He is my English teacher.

He is special to me because he treats me as a good friend.①He always wears a smile and gives me the impression that he can help me out whenever I am in difficulty.

He has a good sense of humor and likes making friends.②His classes are very interesting. After class, he often helps me with my English. He never smokes.He likes playing football.He likes China so much that he is planning to live in China in the future.(长短句结合原则，前面是简单句，此句是so...that引导的结果状语从句。)③

He is my special friend who l like very much,and I hope I can keep in touch with him.(句式多变原则，此句为复合句，who又引导定语从句。)

你也可以这样表达

① Treating me as a good friend,he is special to me.

②He is humorous and likes making friends.

③He has so much deep love for China that he is planning to live in China in the future

范文译文

我的特殊朋友

你知道史密斯先生吗?他是我的英语老师。

他对我来说很特殊，因为他把我当成好朋友。他总是面带微笑，给我留下一种无论我何

时遇到困难，他总会帮助我的印象。

他很幽默，喜欢交朋友。他的课非常有趣。下课后，他经常帮我学习英语。他从不抽烟。

他喜欢踢足球。他如此喜欢中国，以至于计划将来在中国定居。

他是我特殊的朋友，我非常喜欢他，我希望我们以后能保持联系。

第五部分

热点话题满分写人记叙文必背

01

邓亚萍是世界上最出色的乒乓球运动员之一。请根据提示写一篇关于她的作文。

1)1973年出生于郑州。

2)5岁的时候开始打乒乓球，她努力训练，所以她后来成为一名伟大的运动员。

3)她赢得了很多世界比赛，包括在奥运会中的四枚金牌。我们为她而骄傲。

4)邓亚萍二十四岁时停止打乒乓球。在那之后她开始在北京的清华大学学习，并且出国深造。

5)七年之后，她在剑桥大学完成了她的博士学位。无论她做什么，她从不放弃。

注意：

1)词数：不少于80;

2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

提示词：in the Olympics在奥运会中Tsinghua University清华大学Cambridge University剑桥大学

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优秀满分范文

One possible version:

My hero is Deng Yaping. She is one of the best table tennis players in the world. Let me tell you something about her.

Deng Yaping was born in Zhengzhou in 1973. She started playing table tennis when she was five years old. She trained hard,so she became a great player later. She’s won many world competitions, including four gold medals in the Olympics. We are all proud of her. Deng Yaping stopped playing table tennis when she was twenty-four. After that, she began to study at Tsinghua University in Beijing and attended university abroad. Seven years later,she completed her doctor’s degree at Cambridge University. Whatever she does, she never gives up. She is simply the best. She is a true hero.

In short, she is so great that we will learn from her. As long as we study hard, our dream will come true one day.

详解

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍世界上最出色的乒乓球运动员之一——邓亚萍的相关情况。

2.写作指导：本文主要以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，人称采用第三人称。分为三段式：第一段引出主题;第二段介绍她的个人信息以及她在乒乓球上取得的成就;第三段表达自己对她的钦佩之情。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

02

本届东京奥运会上跳水小将全红婵一战成名，给全世界留下了深刻印象。假设你是Mary，你的笔友John想多了解一些全红婵的相关情况。请你给John写一封信，介绍一下这位奥运小明星并表达你对她的祝愿。要点如下：

注意事项：

1.信件必须包括以上要点信息，要求语句通顺，意思连贯;

2.词数60个左右，信件的开头和结尾部分已在答题卷上给出，不计入总词数;

3.信件必须写在答题卷的指定位置上。

Dear John,

I am happy to tell you something about Quan Hongchan.

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All the best, Mary

优秀满分范文

One possible version:

Dear John,

I am happy to tell you something about Quan Hongchan. She’s 14. She comes from Guangdong. She’s in Chinese diving team. Quan’s parents are farmers. She’s the second child in her family. She’s short and thin. She looks cute. She loves diving and practises it every day. In her free time, she likes playing computer games. Her dream is to get more champions for China. I hope her dream comes true.

All the best,

Mary

详解

1.题干解读：该题目属于书信作文。题目要求是请你以Mary的身份，根据提示背景，给你的笔友John写一封60词左右的信，向他介绍一下奥运小明星全红婵，并表达你对她的祝愿。

2.写法指导：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要是第三人称;写作中，要根据提示要点介绍全红婵的个人信息、家庭信息，最后表达你对全红婵的祝愿。文章要紧扣题目要点，千万不要遗漏要点，内容可适发挥，但要保证语句通顺，意思连贯，语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句要符合英语的表达习惯，不要出现语法错误。

03

请以“He/She Has Changed a Lot”为题，从外貌、性格、爱好或其他方面介绍一下你身边的一个人在这几年的变化。

要求：1. 至少写出三个变化，可适当发挥;

2. 80词左右。

He/She Has Changed a Lot

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优秀满分范文

He Has Changed a Lot

My friend Jimmy has changed a lot in the last few years.

Jimmy used to be fat and eat a lot of unhealthy food. Three years ago, his doctor told him that he should do more exercise and eat healthily. So he took doctor’s advice and did more exercise to lose weight. Now he is thinner and healthier.

Jimmy used to hate the school life. One year ago, he and his parents had a long talk. That’s when he decided to change. Now he studies harder than he used to. He knows that his parents love him and they are proud of him.

Jimmy used to be shy. His face would turn red when he talked to people. Now he is more outgoing and can give speeches in public. That makes him more popular.

People sure change! I’m glad to see my friend’s great change.

详解

题干解读：该题目是话题作文，从外貌、性格、爱好或其他方面介绍一下你身边的一个人在这几年的变化。

写作指导：人称用第三人称;时态主要用一般现在时和一般过去时;写作时，可采用“总分总”的思路来写，先说这个人在过去几年发生了很大的变化，然后具体阐述变化体现的方面，最后进行总结。注意保证内容完整、结构清晰，无语法和拼写错误。

04

根据要求完成小作文。谈一谈自己的一个爱好。

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优秀满分范文

Everyone has hobbies. Hobbies give us a lot of happiness. Then what’s my hobby? My hobby is listening to music.

When I was a child, I enjoy listening to music, especially the cartoon music. As I grow up, I like all kinds of music. Though I’m not good at it, I often lose myself in it. When I am in trouble, music can make me calm down. When I am very tired, it can make me comfortable. When I am angry with something, it also can make me happy again. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it’s good for my health.

Do you like listening to music? If not, I hope you can have a try. You’ll find it so good.

详解

1.题干解读：题干要求谈论自己的爱好。写作时，应围绕自己的一个爱好进行介绍，并适当添加具体内容，比如，有这一爱好的原因或这一爱好的好处是什么。

2.写作指导：本文时态应以一般现在时为主，人称主要使用第一人称。可分为三段：第一段点明自己的爱好是什么;第二段陈述这一爱好的好处;第三段对自己的爱好进行推荐并收尾。写作时，注意主谓一致，无语法和标点错误。

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