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步骤与要点如下:
1.确定主题,并在文中说明原因;
2.围绕主题,进行叙述;
3.写出具体计划,也可以讲述一段与主题有关的故事或经历。
要求:
1. 补全标题(参考词汇:better, happier,healthier, stronger等);
2. 字迹工整,内容完整连贯,语言准确规范;
3. 鼓励写出真情实感,对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 作文中可以写出具体计划内容,也可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,但要注意时态的运用;如果参照短文中的内容,不可以直接引用短文中的句子;
5. 作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Good habits make me________
Good habits are important in our lives.They influence us a lot in many ways. I think …
以上题干,Hersey给大家简单总结为三要素:标题;原因;事例【计划、故事、经历三选其一】。当然,三要素一定要一致,原因要指向观点,事例要指向原因+观点。
接下来,怎样开始写呢?我们通常要以三部分来完成写作。
第一部分,观点+原因。如I think good habits make me healthier.(观点) With good habits, I can live a regular life.(原因)
第二部分,也是最重要的部分——事例。本部分是作文的主体部分,事例一定要突出中心,支持自己的观点成立。首先,三选一,计划要用将来时态进行叙述,故事、经历要用过去时态。个人认为经历最好写,也最有说服力。最简单的写法就是Time-Place-Character-Beginning-Middle-Ending,也就是大家熟悉的记叙文六要素了。如:I can still remember the experience of the summer holiday before Ibecame a junior high school student, I had a large amount of free time. I choseto play computer games all day and all night to relax. Sometimes I even forgotto have dinner. At last, I got very sick and went to hospital. The doctor toldme that I must keep good habits such as eating on time and doing exercisesregularly. From then on, I changed my lifestyle. I woke up early and wentjogging every morning; I had every meal regularly, and so on. As a result, Ibecame healthier and healthier.
第三部分,总结。目的是升华主题,发出畅想、号召等。如:In my opinion, keeping good habits is the most helpful way to keephealthy. If you want to become healthier, it is high time that you should keepgood habits.
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