初中英语写作技巧，英语作文想不得满分都难(2)

　　实例1：

　　假如你有两位同学——芳芳和明明，参加了上星期二学校组织的英语演讲比赛，他们的不同表现使你深有感触。请你根据下列表各中的内容提示写一篇英语短文。

　　芳芳

　　明明

　　我

　　1.认为自己英语好，不需要努力；花费时间挑选比赛用的漂亮衣服

　　2.因准备不足，太紧张，而没有完成演讲。

　　1.努力学习，向别人请教；赛前两天腿受伤，但不放弃

　　2.在比赛中表现良好

　　应该向明明学习

　　参考词汇：英语演讲比赛 English Speech Contest

　　要求：

　　1. 词数：80~100个

　　2. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数

　　3. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥

　　Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.

　　Before the contest， Fangfang thought__________________.

　　范文1

　　Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.

　　Before the contest， Fangfang thought her English was the best. So shespent lots of time picking some beautiful clothes for herself instead of trying to work hard at English for the contest. As a result， she didn't do well in the contest because she hadn't got ready for the contest.

　　But Mingming was different from Fangfang. He worked hard at Englishand asked others for help. Especially， his leg was hurt two days before the contest， but he never gave up. In the end， he won the contest.

　　No doubt， from Mingming we should learn ： No pains， No gains. From now on， I mush learn fromMingming.

　　范文2

　　Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.

　　Before the contest， Fangfang thought she was good at English， and that she didn't need to spend more time on the contest at all. She alwaysconsidered picking some beautiful clothes for the contest. But Mingming was different. He worked hard at English and asked others for help. Though he had hurt his leg two days before the contest， he never gave up.

　　In the end， Fangfang didn't get ready well enough. At the contest， she was so nervous that she she failed. But Mingming won because of his efforts.

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